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I love the fast paced intro. The snares are a little overpowering though. Maybe turn them down a bit and eq them. I like the chiptune lead though. The track gets a bit repetitive though. I would also change the tone sometimes. For example, add low pass filters to everything at certain points and slowly elevate the cuttoff. I also did not like the transition around 1:40. I suggest adding a low pass to that. Other than that, it's a pretty good track.

Sequenced responds:

Thanks for your comment man. This track is really old! makes me cringe hard haha. my newer tracks are of better quality.

Great Track! Congrats on 200'000 SC followers.

Like the soft chill intro. The ambience helps. The harp is nice and melodic. Love the progression of the track. Pads are nice. Drum beat is nice too. I really like it. Although the bell is overused (nexus preset right?). I like the idea with the bell, but I personally am biased against that bell sound. If it is the nexus preset then try using a different one. Other than that I really enjoyed listening to it.

Hard intro. The 808 could be a tad louder. I think more post processing on the basses could make the track a bit better. Also I would change up the basses more. They don't sound the best. Overall, pretty good track.

Ooooh nice intro. Sounds straight out of a movie soundtrack. This would be nice for nocopyright youtube music. I think this would sound nice in a funny moments video or something.

Noise4Games responds:

Thanks for the kind words! Also thanks for the nocopyright suggestion. I am not sure how exactly nc YT music works yet, but I will read more about it.

Nice intro. Although I have one comment on it though. The sound after for the transition was sick. Melodies were nice. I think at one point in the intro though, it went a note or 2 off key but it wasn't that noticeable. Nice kerby chants. The drop was nice. It seemed to mix marshmello music with chiptune. Honestly I really like it. Can't wait to hear more from you. Man this is one of the only songs on NG recent audio that seems to be mastered.

DoctorNoSense responds:

Thx for the positive feedback^^

Damn that intro sure caught me by surprise. The track is very loud. Also it sounds like a regular kick with bitcrusher. The melody is kinda cool. The kick is ear piercing though. Please if you didn't release this anywhere. Change the kick. And turn the volume down a bit.

The intro piano starts off nice, but then goes off key. Vocals are too loud, and sound like an advertisement. I don't know if this is a joke but whatever. It's not that bad. The beat is fine. Also the beat is very repetitive.

The intro has a little too much high end. Nice drums and melodies. The sub was nice. Turn the chants down a bit and maybe add reverb to them. I would remove the standalone kicks in the 8 bars before the bar. Also the basses in the drop need post processing. I would research how people post process their basses. Honestly the basses themselves and arrangement are very nice. The post drop melody could be a bit louder. It is very faint. Since it's such a good melody it should be the main part of the bridge (post drop). The main arrangement of the second drop should change a bit to add variation or at least change the bass sound a little. I know there is a bit of variation but there could be a bit more. Overall, the track is pretty good, but there is always room for improvement. I look forward to hearing more from you. Oh and lol nice anime chant to end the track xD. Oh and final thing. I would lookup mastering for dubstep. If you have Ozone 8 I suggest Crow's 2 ways to master dubstep, but if you don't have Ozone 8 then find a different one. Good luck to you.

The drums sound stock fl studio. Melodies are very nice keep them up. Supersaws are weak. Bass feels a bit off. Whole track is quiet. Research mastering techniques for stock fl studio plugins. It will help you a lot. So keep at it and you will keep improving. Also for dubstep, I recommend the plugin, Serum, or Massive. Serum is easier to learn though. You could probably find a crack if you don't have the money. Fl studio harmor is works well too along with sytrus. Just research how to make dubstep basses with them. Also get the free plugin OTT. USE THIS ON EVERYTHING. Although I would lower the depth to around 30% on most sounds, then drag the middle bars slightly to the right until it sounds better than before. I also sometimes change the downward to 80%. Also add risers to the buildups. I suggest researching free samplepacks. I got free cymatics sample packs which are usually paid off of a site called fls audio. I hope you take this feedback and improve because this took a long time to type up.

DustifiedGD responds:

I use FL studio mobile. I announced this on my profile. The whole track is quiet; I could have compressed the sounds but the problem is it makes the bass too loud. I did add risers to the buildups. This is literally my first time ever using this software so obviously all the mixing is bad. What I meant about me me finding a way to do dubstep was to do it with some really low and well-mixed bass. Maybe I put too many effects on the bass? It was originally supposed to be a dubstep track so maybe that’s it. All the instruments could be considered stock fl studio. Honestly all the things you recommended did not involve the basic fl studio mobile and as such is not very helpful. Also never hide your score. Ever. That’s not helpful to anyone.

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Ryan Blaney @RyanBlaneyOfficial

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